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So today I felt inspired to finally finish a song I've been working on for ages, and I thought I'd throw the MP3 up here for you all to listen to (and enjoy?). No vocals but I will put the lyrics and it's not too hard to follow along with the "doo-doo-doo" of the synth voice. Haha

Insight into my songwriting process on this one. Years and years ago (well, not that many) I started writing the song. I got most of the verses and all of the themes (several different melodies in this one), and then I got stuck. Then about a year and a half ago, I was working on a fanfic on TMS and wanted to have the female character and Taylor work on some songs together. This song jumped out at me, and all of a sudden it was a duet and I rewrote the second verse and added a bridge. But it didn't have an ending. I suck at ending things, and sometimes you can't just repeat the chorus and fade out.

Today, I am reveling in having both free time and a quiet apartment. I pulled the song out (among others that I need to work on) and listened through a couple times. I threw down some experimental chords. And then I realized that what I really wanted to do was lay out the la-la-la section again, but with a new part overlaid. Ta-da!

So here is the MP3 of "First Impressions".



It's getting difficult and I feel complicated
By the things I've learned about you since we casually dated
And lately it seems fated I'll go on my separate way
It turns out our worlds aren't black or white
But opposing shades of gray

La-la-la-la...

Wouldn't it be nice if first impressions would remain
But it seems we've been thru changes that I just can't explain
(Wouldn't it be nice) Wouldn't it be nice

It's been too long since your love could hypnotize
Since I could read your thoughts by looking in your eyes
But now you can't disguise the distance in your heart
I never thought we'd end like this and it's tearing me apart

La-la-la-la...

Wouldn't it be nice if first impressions would remain
But it seems we've been thru changes that I just can't explain
(Wouldn't it be nice) Wouldn't it be nice (Wouldn't it be nice)

Baby can't you see that nothing's changed
It's just I know you better now
I better leave now (Baby should I go?)

Wouldn't it be nice if first impressions would remain
But it seems we've been thru changes that I just can't explain
(Wouldn't it be nice) Wouldn't it be nice

La-la-la-la...
Hey, that is great Mari. I liked it a lot!
Very pretty melody Mari!! Highfive This is my favorite line:
It's been too long since your love could hypnotize
Since I could read your thoughts by looking in your eyes

Very cool to have a songwriter among us! HighfiveHuggy
Bravo,clap,clap and also want to give congrats on your move.HighfiveKeep it up maybe someday you and a brown eyed guy can do a duet.Smile
Thaaaaanks! Grin I will try to get some software so I can record my voice too. Need to find someone to sing backups... maybe I can blackmail a sister or two... hehehe.

mari Wrote:
Thaaaaanks! Grin I will try to get some software so I can record my voice too. Need to find someone to sing backups... maybe I can blackmail a sister or two... hehehe.


Wouldn't dare ask your girlfriend, would you. Roll Eyes

Bravo! w00t

I suggest that we can have auditions for backup singers at the party.

Margaux Wrote:
Bravo! w00t

I suggest that we can have auditions for backup singers at the party.


Rotfl Perfect!



And no, I would not ask my girlfriend, because every time I do, she claims she can't sing. (Even though she can.) Wink

mari Wrote:

Margaux Wrote:
Bravo! w00t

I suggest that we can have auditions for backup singers at the party.


Rotfl Perfect!



And no, I would not ask my girlfriend, because every time I do, she claims she can't sing. (Even though she can.) Wink


It's the shy monster. hide

Mari:
That is a VERY pretty melody!
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